some people think you have to go to universities to have any hope of success in your future career, others say that not everyone is suitable for higher education and that it is possible to build a successful career without a degree on your CV. what is your view point
People have different views whether they should pursue a university education. While some people feel that it is likely to seek a good job if they attend a university, others think there are many ways to get it because higher education is not an appropriate decision for every student.
Going to the university, recently, is a common choice of many students. There are many courses that meet their demand and they are given advice from prestigious professors or lecturers. In there, besides getting specific knowledge, students can acquire new soft skills such as time management, presentation or communication skill which are advantageous when applying for a job. Moreover, a degree is a prerequisite for consideration for most professional careers like doctor, engineer or architecture. A university degree, therefore, is thought to be a vital factor to open doors to successful jobs.
However, to succeed in having a job, people have many ways. One of them is to take up an apprenticeship if they do not want to pursue higher education. This helps people get more practical experience and training which are what recruiters need from applicators. Nevertheless, many people choose to start their own business. Although it brings many challenges, some people also have big achievements. Take the father of Microsoft – Bill Gates as an example, he did not have any college degree and now he is one of the richest people in over the world.
In conclusion, some people like going to university, but others want to choose another road to success. In my opinion, although which choice they make, a successful career lies in creativity, intelligence, and ability.
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I agree that you don't need…
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16236162362 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02402520185 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4921430646 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246488157815 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791893984796 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049850825799 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150441422307 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288704092486 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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