Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the detention natural beasts in zoos. While some people opine that zoos are unethical, I hold a conviction that zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation, endangered animals to be precise.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that keep wild beasts in cages is against morality. The bottom line is that the underlying target of zoos is exploiting animals to make money. Although having no right to use natural animals for entertainment and profit, many parks still make use of the curiosity of the public to charge entry and gain profits. In addition, the animals that are kept in artificial environments can suffer from mental detriment. Elephants, for example, innately live in huge matriarchal families, but being held in captivity without any interaction with their surrounding, they may feel incompatible with. This can cause stress and sometimes shorten their lifespan, which results in an increasing mortality rate among these sentient beings.
On the other hand, I side with those who believe that zoos provide secure premises for rare species. Firstly, rare animals; especially imperiled species, can reap the benefits to avoid being under threat of extinction. Specific breeding programs for animals on the red list of threatened species; for example, can deter these beasts from dying off. Meanwhile, nowadays, many nature parks are catering enriched environments, such as increasing space or introducing elements of their natural environments. By doing this, animals can live in a place similar to their natural habitats, and environment issues cannot jeopardize their chances of survival.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why opponents argue for the viciousness of keeping animals in captivity, but in my opinion, zoos at least can benefit rare animals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40753424658 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78042332996 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654109589041 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7426674805 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17051109608 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601146454624 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616161301895 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126517928196 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535947603509 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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