Some People work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.
Competition increases day by day in the world. In the past years, People thinks that work for same company all their lives but, now trend is change. Nowadays, People work for a variety of organisations.
To begin with, many people say that staying the same organisation is better for employees because stability is achieve anything in life. It has a more chances to get promotion and higher position in the future. One of the main reason is staying in a same company is that if a person stuck in a financial condition or any personal problem so, Company will be support financially. Employers value loyalty and may offer extra incentives to long term employees like bonuses.
While others people say that working in a different organisations is better. The greatest reason to working in a plenty of companies are that people can able to get new opportunities to learn different skills and challenging tasks. They have a chance to meeting with new people and coordinate with them. Companies may be pay higher because of the experience.
People who stay with the same organisation have the advantage of understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and atmosphere. And also it is necessary to working in a multiple companies because of their growth and skill development. Working in a different company with bigger challenges is great chance for them to deal with different kind of situation.
To conclude, working for the same organisation can provide financial and job security while also I feel that change is good and beneficial for people and changing company in order to earn more money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to long term employees like bonuses. While others people say that working in a dif...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'organisation'?
Suggestion: organisation
... people say that working in a different organisations is better. The greatest reason to worki...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...atmosphere. And also it is necessary to working in a multiple companies because of thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, i feel, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98161764706 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82021241669 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8654284128 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369652874928 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136252071337 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124414981014 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224661982987 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660861664815 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.