Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages
Regarding the issue of the place that workers should work in, people hold different views. While I accept that working from home may provide benefits for those workers, I believe that travelling to workplace in a daily basis can bring huge advantages to both employees and their companies.
On the one hand, I would agree that doing workers' job at home will have positive effects on them. Firstly, by doing this, they can save not only their money but also their time instead of going to the offices. For example, researches recently have shown that staffs could spend approxiamtely one hour per day on average in relaxing instead of travelling to their companies. Secondly, working at home can help the authorities to solve the traffic jam issues. Being motivated by staying at home, people will conduct their work without going to offices, which can reduce the traffic density. As a result, working from home can save a considerable amount of time and money of the society.
On the other hand, I believe that going to work can provide enormous benefits for workers and also their companies. Manufacture company needs employees to operate the machine which enable those companies to produce the products. For instance, employees in a car manufacturer should travel to the workplace and operate those high-end technologies to manufacture luxurious cars which help companies to cultivate huge profits. Furthermore, staffs go to the offices not only for working but also for meeting their colleagues and standing a better chance of establishing relationships. By working in the offices, they can gain a better understanding of each others and cement a healthier relationships. Consequently, travelling to the workplace can mostly benefit employees.
In conclusion, although working from home might have several advantages, I believe going to the offices could bring enormous benefits to workers,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24013157895 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82390730651 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4654804083 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276303502485 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099534224438 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581101243298 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181969200942 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458243225105 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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