Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a work place every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
The Internet has become increasingly ubiquitous, and it has also become an integral part of our lives. Hence, a contentious dispute has been provoked over whether the merits of working from home outstrip the demerits. In my opinion, it seems that the disadvantages transcend the advantages.
To begin with, telecommuting might have salient features. Saving time deems to be one of this paradigm shift. To enumerate, employees could spend hours in either public transportation or their own motor vehicles in order to commute to their workplace, but by virtue of teleworking, the will be able to perform their jobs from home, so that the wasted hours while commuting to the work will be gained. Therefore, spending more time with families is one of the positive consequences.
Nonetheless, although remote work has undoubted benefits, the negative implications cannot be overlooked. One of these serious repercussions could be obesity epidemic because those who work remotely are sitting all day in front of computers’ screens, which lead to laziness, and they tend to move less. Thus, not only do they put on extra weight, but they also can deteriorate their eyes due to the long hours spent during working. Moreover, when they work from home, they will miss the opportunity to acquire competencies that can be teamwork skills. This is because they have less interaction with their work colleagues.
In conclusion, while telecommuting has obvious advantages, of which saving time is the most apparent, it has disadvantages as well, most notably is obesity. In my view, the drawbacks surpass the benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27131782946 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99674321951 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9848515235 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230441585048 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682733102481 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708756650694 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118943533779 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624274517161 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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