In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. Physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?
Education is a movement from darkness to light. Schools and universities are the roadways facilitating that movement. It has been observed that, compared to their counterparts, the female students are more inclined towards pursuing arts subjects. Whereas their peers are more towards science. In this, I will discuss why is that so and if that path should be hindered or not.
Scientifically speaking, it is seen that the female student's brain works more towards how to marvel in spoken or written words and playing puns. They are more pleased by the arts than science, even I have noticed on several occasions in a classroom, that when a girl doodles, it is either a bird or a flower in most of the cases. Such things show that they are more inclined towards arts. To add more, the consensus in many countries is that the female is more in behind the desk and computer jobs. To illustrate, in engineering fields like Mechanical, Civil, the proportion of the female students is often negligible.
The world is moving towards unity and discrimination based on sex is found to be considerably low in many countries and according to me, that should be. I most certainly think that this tendency should be altered. The artistic thinking of the females can be very much utilized in solving many complex problems, which by the way, many a times man are incapable. Not to mention, the acute sense of female in finding the needle in a haystack is uncomparable. Further, who has defined the rules like, this job should be done by certain groups of person only.
The country devoid of such thinking and mindset will often come out good in the world, I think that this tendency should be changed world wide. If that happens a world and society would be a better place to live in. Not to mention the technological advancement, it will boost in a country if varied mindsets are working towards a single target.
To end with, I would say that there are scientific reasons as to why women are more towards arts, but taking it literally can be harmful and would be a hinder to the human development, This should definitely be changed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, as to, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75945945946 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67480875937 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537837837838 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5516720618 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6842105263 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173996802131 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565796127441 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072985949954 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104250263806 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452277318538 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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