Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved.
Despite the risks involved, some individuals are obsessed with extreme sports. There are many reasons behind this obsession as in adrenaline rush and adventurous personalities. To reduce the potential hazards, some training courses can be introduced as well as adequate provision of facilities and proper equipment.
The chief reasons for pursuing dangerous sports can be manifold. To embark with, due to the monotonous regularity of daily lives, many people come in need of extreme sports like martial arts to secret adrenaline, which is a hormone that brings about happiness. This, therefore, provokes a sense of internal satisfaction in those who do extreme sports regularly. The other reason, on the other hand, deals with varied personality types. Even though some people are risk-averse and avoid hazardous sports, many are adventurous. For the latter groups, extreme sports are an embedded part of life. They feel a sense of personal fulfillment only by being exposed to danger; take individual swimming with sharks as an example, despite their awareness of the danger, they would never doubt trying it.
Many preventative measures need to be taken to put the potential hazards under control. On one hand, introducing training courses for beginners is extremely effective to assist them with action sports, and then choose if they are willing to take part in them. On the other hand, authorities should provide sportsmen with proper equipment and space for their training sessions. For instance, in Iran, there is still no safe zone for practicing parkour, and that leads to many injuries for tracers.
To conclude, people are quite different in terms of selecting their desired sports. Some are more interested in extreme sports due to the good feelings accompanying with doing them and individuals’ personalities, while others are not. Both training courses before doing sports and top-quality equipment can help to limit their danger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uipment can help to limit their danger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39215686275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77587785852 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8596270134 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0588235294 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324177443464 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978195414599 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628568567348 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189266792998 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900952094217 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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