Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, company and society. Discuss and give opinion.
It is true that the question of whether the fact that people changing their jobs is acceptable or not remains a source of controversy in career field. While a number of people believe that there should be an objection against occupation alternation, I would argue that adjustment in different kind of jobs only brings everyone benefits for themselves.
On the one hand, occupation variation is not highly approved among the society due to the great competitiveness in some majors and the annual unemployment rate. Firstly, it is thought that people oppose to the idea of changing careers of some individuals for the fear of losing their own jobs. For instance, frequently being under pressure by the intense competition among colleagues sounds challenging enough, these days people even have to keep an eye open for those working outside the field ready to change their mind anytime and may as well accidently steal away their jobs they have been competing for years. Secondly, altering occupation also receives criticism for having an adverse impact on the rate of unemployment. People trying different kinds of work are complained for the lack of dedication towards their careers and sometimes are the blame for the increase in the proportion of people who are out of work due to lesser jobs opportunities.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that everyone should have a chance to try working outside their majors for the potential in self-development. For example, instead of staying in the same job for a long period of time and experiencing feelings of boredom and stress day by day, taking an effort in other careers will not only bring people the opportunity to develop their creative thinking and sharpen their skills and abilities but also get them a higher chance of taking on leadership roles. Another reason is that not everyone starts their first job based on their genuine interest and as a consequence, poor work performance is the result. Switching between jobs means the actual chances of following the career path that they have a passion.
In conclusion, although both views have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to try working in different career fields for people at least once in their lifetime as the chances of having a lucrative job or actually following their dream occupation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
It is true that the question of whether the fact that people changing their job...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d of staying in the same job for a long period of time and experiencing feelings of boredom an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01291989664 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75670511872 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3542985231 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296073072845 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111094959616 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044361095984 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18405770886 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042545798026 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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