Success is only a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people claim that success is just a matter of luck. Personally, I believe the adverse that success requires beyond luck.
On the one hand, there are some other factors which can be attributed to our accomplishments of our goals. First and foremost, there is no doubt that these comprise determination. Once people actually realise their needs to force themselves into doing such things, they have already gained their determination and also passion, which, moreover, leads to their hard-working and industrious attitudes towards their goals. Secondly, some other elements such as appearance, social relationships and money do make a difference. Since we are now living in a fast-paced world, the first impressions always have a vital role to play, especially for those who are in their thirties and above. As this is probably going to affect working environment. For instance, for some kinds of careers, namely those who work as actors, actresses or singers, in order to succeed, they have to create their best images to the audiences.
On the other hand, the element of luck is necessary. Firstly, our emotions will influence our performances. For example, whenever someone is in good mood, things result in much better conditions, but when things go unexpectedly, ones can let themselves down unconsciously. Furthermore, nothing in this world is completely fair. There are some errors or misunderstandings that actually exist and sometimes they would affect a quite great number of situations that people are in, and they are, of course, unavoidable.
To summarise, though luck is considered to be a thing that contributes to success, there are some other elements that can also decide the paths to our goals, whether they do smoothly or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 684, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se who are in their thirties and above. As this is probably going to affect workin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2304964539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96688164592 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.393665978 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857428768588 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360598134121 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519535836643 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849094134189 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666167026147 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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