Nowadays, sports profession has become quite popular in all over the world and the main factor behind this fame is media.The way of media coverage of games or famous sportsmen is very impressive and owing to this peoples become followers those personalities. It is true that successful sports people can gain huge money in short time in comparison to others professions. It is considered by many that it is acceptable to pay them huge money while others argued that it is unfair. In my opinion, they should not be salaried such a great amount and disparity in income between comparable profession ought to be eliminated.
Many are agreed that talented sports peoples should be paid high amount firstly due to these famous celebrities are favorite persons to them and supporters always support them both in good and bad times. Secondly, this type of gift or prizes is also encouraged other people to participate in games and further nourish country with a capable player. Thirdly, successful players represent country during international games and they make the nation proud. Fourthly, professional life span is very short for these celebrities in contrast others and they need to earn money in a short window period. Lastly, they spend their childhood to teenage time and huge money in training so that they deserved for enormous money for their achievements.
On the other hand, when other professional people namely a doctor, scientist or an engineer spend a long period in the study but never earn such a big amount even in whole life. Furthermore, a doctor works whole life for humanity and saves lives of people and when they failed they also get punishment but if sports persons lose games they even get some amount for playing. Similarly, a soldier spends life in fights for the country and many died in wars and their family receive mere compensation. Moreover, when they receive a huge amount in an hour game while others could not in throughout carrier then it generate less valued feeling among other professions.
To conclude, a successful sportsperson deserves a good salary but not a huge amount which differentiates them from other important professionals.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'lastly', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'in short', 'in my opinion', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251295336788 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.129533678756 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.147668393782 0.0946595960268 156% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0569948186528 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0569948186528 0.0437548338989 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.113989637306 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0284974093264 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72932746204 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259067357513 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0751295336788 0.0861772015684 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0129533678756 0.021408717616 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103626943005 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2191.0 1933.35771543 113% => OK
No of words: 360.0 316.048096192 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08611111111 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361111111111 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236111111111 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163888888889 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122222222222 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72932746204 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547222222222 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 60.3611479248 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.7142857143 20.7743622355 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.929568674 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 127.492653851 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7743622355 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 0.814263465372 193% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.99599198397 450% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.3253968254 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.6170212766 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286421119403 0.332605444948 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119422606383 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0876268203775 0.0668466124924 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538562480912 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146671111207 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116145157355 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653625540754 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282068307484 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137949595562 0.0638462369009 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175353520776 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749021113702 0.058150111329 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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