The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern societies, the media has played an important role in transmitting news worldwide. The question of whether the news reports should concentrate on alarming issues or not still remains controversial. Personally, I am convinced that the disadvantages of excessive reports on negative aspects of society can outweigh its benefits.
To begin with, there is no denying that the news on emergencing issues can raise awareness of citizens, therefore, many lives can be saved in certain situations.To illustrate, the news on natural disasters is considered to be the best way to provide a full picture of what dangers people are facing with. Another significant example is the positive effect of reports on smoking-related illnesses which can encourage people to have a healthy lifestyle.
However, successive transmission of news on problems can provide the citizens with pessimistic points of view. Consequently, many people can live in fear of dangers due to the misleading information. For instance, the exaggeration of the media on corruption can result in the citizens’s mistrust of government despite its outstanding achievements in improving quality of life.
Another hindrance that should be concerned is the side-effect of detailed reports on crime. In some cases, these can be training sources for the other criminals who want to break the laws. As a result, it cannot be denied that the exceedingly thorough description of crime can pose a threat to the safety of human beings.
In conclusion, I believe that the excessive news on negative aspects of society can bring more harms than goods. The more careful selection of news of the media, the better society will be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33208955224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1112400336 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2831646014 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152181534925 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608909081949 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545921971484 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970424565136 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743434094626 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.