There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Many sorts of music exist in today’s world. In my opinion, it is one of the most important and powerful things in a human's life, and I believe that folk music is essential than the international music.
Firstly, music is one of those things that lets people express emotions good or bad. Because of some feelings are simply impossible to translate into words. So, without melodies and harmonies, our life would be total emptiness. Besides that, it is scientifically proven that music is also good for our health. It can be therapeutic, make people relaxed, and better state of mind due to reduces depression and anxiety.
At the same time, there is a traditional music which is important for our culture and community. It came from the old days and passed down through the generations and centuries. Folk music has been around for a long time, and because of every nation has own music it has a lack of copyright. Also, folk music often reflects historical and personal events. It is a reason that during most holidays we prefer to play traditional music rather than others. However, it is an undeniable fact that globalisation factor effects music sector, too. New generations, especially the youngest ones interest international music now, and folk songs are forgotten.
In conclusion, I think that life without music would be boring, and with its cultural, traditional and historical perspectives, folk music has great importance than any other kind of music. It is the responsibility of nation that its traditional form of music prevails and are not lost in the globalisation area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02247191011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8467474703 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0907306137 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440364113488 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149814244902 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105670100123 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291397273641 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110697143613 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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