There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is tranditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
From the origin of the Earth, when humans do not appear. The sky and the ground are dominated by dinosaurs enormous and powerful. The music has existed for a long time; it can be a simple thing like a whisper of the wind, an echo of the juggle, etc. Egyptians say music was a divine gift delivered of Gods. Since then, music has gone abreast on the human's road of development and evolution.
Music is prism illustrates realistic of life and human's feeling. From mother's lullaby to love confession; all of this contain sincere and tormenting emotion; it helps us to express words of the heart sent to people, who we love; the strength comrade in war and a cure for the psychiatric. It not only make us empathetic with people around the world but also sharing with anguish mans. Music has a lot of uses that we can estimate, so it is important spiritual material indispensable in human's life.
Every country and territory have its subculture abide from ancient and music are one of it. Traditional music role is irreplaceable; it a heritage invaluable; the essence of the artistic creation of generations and the fundamental of nation's culture development in future. But today, mankind has entered into the ear technology and market economy that leads to the trend of global integration and globalisation.
Personally, traditional music like international music, we need to get rid of the ugliness and retain the goodness. Everything has two sides; the globalisation makes us see the significant of value in traditional music as point advances of international music. From that, we can develop; enhance and create the new things.
In sum, to two musical genres stand and move forward together, each government have to undertake, maintain dynamic and proper development
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99662162162 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8994576928 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7919462761 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353641697639 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109593433419 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873159073369 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183884660319 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771223134193 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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