There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays

Submitted by yuukartika on Thu, 05/07/2015 - 00:53

Music is a common matter in human's life. It can be found easily in all over area in our lives. In education system of Indonesia for instance, music becomes one of the main curriculum in the early stage to senior high school. Furthermore, music has widely suggested as the effective way to communicate each other.

There are several reasons to conclude why music is needed by people. In psychology side, music is related with people's feeling. It is known as the way to uplift mood and somehow it helps people in order to keep the stress away or relieve the pain. Moreover, sound and tone have a co...

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mother tend to keep play the classical music,
mothers tend to keep playing the classical music,

Local music which has close relation
Local music which has a close relation

which spread all over the world and well-known as modern music,
which spread all over the world and is well-known as modern music,

The development of music causes there is a segmentation within people to choose the genre of musics.
The development of music causes a segmentation within people to choose the genre of musics.

The existence of both types are complementing
The existence ... is complementing

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