There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions?
The widespread problem of anti-social behaviours and disrespectful attitudes towards others has long been a major topic of concern in society. There are several reasons resulting in this negative trend and some measures could be taken to mitigate this problem.
In some cases, people may hold an anti-social attitude or disrespect others because they live in an environment where violence and discrimination are the norms. For example, children from dysfunctional families where domestic violence happens on a daily basis could show a worrying tendency of disrespecting women. Moreover, children are likely to mimic tactic and code of behavior of their idols since they are susceptible to extrinsic elements and are easily influenced by celebrites. For example, well-known people who frequently use foul language as well as express their anger and hatred in their songs or their speech are promoted as a role model of strong personality. When there is no one to help young children distinguish between the good and the bad, ill-mannered attitudes may emerge and develop among them without being controlled.
In order to resolve this social phenomenon, there are some feasible solutions to be adopted. Firstly, parents must not underestimate the significance of their guidance for children. If they notice any signs of an anti-social or insolent manner in children, they must provide them with negative evaluations of these signs and show them how to behave in an appropriate way. Moreover, governments should introduce restrictions and supervision on the mass media in order to ensure each celebrity behaves properly. Anti-norm behavior or swears should be taken into account and punished. The most practical one would be to raise people’s awareness about the difference between anti-social behaviors and strong personality.
In conclusion, anti-social performances and lack of courtesy for others stem from many prominent reasons and several solutions coul be implemented to tackle this phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...these signs and show them how to behave in an appropriate way. Moreover, governments should introduce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54723127036 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04505386197 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2175963547 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.642857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156761647858 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555136436003 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053240474953 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111734812008 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511722845674 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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