These days, the debate about healthcare provision can be considered as one of the most tense in the developed world. A lot of people believe that comprehensive medical care should be free for everybody and it should not depend on people’s ability to pay

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These days, the debate about healthcare provision can be considered as one of the most tense in the developed world. A lot of people believe that comprehensive medical care should be free for everybody and it should not depend on people’s ability to pay. I partially agree with this point of view, but it is important to bear in my mind that it is almost impossible for a country with market economy guarantee a comprehensive medical care for its citizens
There are several reasons why free medical system is not possible. For me, the main one is that certain hospital services can be too costly for the country to completely cover them. For instance, the price of a lung cancer treatment will at least be $200,000 and even the most prosperous state cannot guarantee a complete payment without cutting down on medication.
Not only that makes me doubtful of the completely state-sponsored medical service. We are all well aware of the fact that every country taxes citizens to create its budget. This means that if the state aims to create a free healthcare system, it will have to substantially increase taxes, which in turn, may lead to more tax evasion.
Having said that, it is undeniable that people who cannot afford their treatment should have it fully sponsored by the state. If the government doesn't do that, this literally means that politicians are violating the right of every citizen to be treated equally.
To sum up, although there is no doubt that there are some advantages of having a free healthcare system, I believe that in today’s technological realm it is not possible.

These days, the debate about healthcare provision can be considered as one of the most tense in the developed world. A lot of people believe that comprehensive medical care should be free for everybody and it should not depend on people’s ability to pay. I partially agree with this point of view, but it is important to bear in my mind that it is almost impossible for a country with market economy guarantee a comprehensive medical care for its citizens

There are several reasons why free medical system is not possible. For me, the main one is that certain hospital services can be too costly for the country to completely cover them. For instance, the price of a lung cancer treatment will at least be $200,000 and even the most prosperous state cannot guarantee a complete payment without cutting down on medication.
Not only that makes me doubtful of the completely state-sponsored medical service. We are all well aware of the fact that every country taxes citizens to create its budget. This means that if the state aims to create a free healthcare system, it will have to substantially increase taxes, which in turn, may lead to more tax evasion.

Having said that, it is undeniable that people who cannot afford their treatment should have it fully sponsored by the state. If the government doesn't do that, this literally means that politicians are violating the right of every citizen to be treated equally.

To sum up, although there is no doubt that there are some advantages of having a free healthcare system, I believe that in today’s technological realm it is not possible.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...onsored by the state. If the government doesnt do that, this literally means that poli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, at least, for instance, no doubt, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90842490842 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77273650606 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9624652503 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452464910391 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165550995069 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21373904373 0.0667982634062 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216578176212 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247813619441 0.056905535591 435% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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