Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are easy to follow on what the media persuade them to buy and unaware about their real needs. These phenomena give promising factor but follow unexpected bad habits.
In the modern social culture, social status has become part of every individual lifestyle. The modern society fellowships maintain their level of what surrounding them. The maintenance can be achieved through many signs, these could be wardrobes, Jewelry, vehicles, watches, mobile phones, and other things which are attached to the personality.
Fortunately, the advertisers use that phenomenal factor to dig the consumer's desires for spending amounts of money, even though, the bought-staff is unnecessary to them. The branded-cars companies joint with the iconic figure to advertise their product. In some cases, the young children, firstly, see their lovely football clubs have partnered with one of the giant car companies. They will persuade their father to afford the car-child dream. In the name of billionaire status, a father will give everything to sustain their name, even though, on Fortuner have already satisfied one household, but that is not enough if the desire dominates individual.
To keep the good reputation stayed in the air is necessary, but it does not mean to waste all your money on the product which you already have. Looking at the example before, father is supposed to educate children to control ambition rather than fulfill the desire and lead to spoiled children.
An additional example can be followed, the Indonesian artists tend to imitate the updated trend, they will eager to hunt the sphere of clothes in which are recently used by actor leader in Hollywood. This condition is used by expertises of sell marketing to spread the relevant product. In another word, which all my opinion, the Advertisers do not play alone to succeed their marketing, it helped by the desire of human behavior to sustain their social reputation, and yet they set aside the real need of personal life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2037037037 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65060032081 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4186817093 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123860235263 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367522942398 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385379640562 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621545164796 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273622546616 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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