Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that more and more people are using mobile phones and computers , this causes losing the ability to communicate face to face . I completely agree with this idea.
There are some reasons why using mobile phones and computers is one of the main causes that losing the ability to communicate face to face . One reason is that when people keep their eyes glued to screens, they do not have enough time to strengthen the relationship between parents and their offspring or chatting with their friends . For example, in the dinner, instead of sharing about their work with parents, they use their mobile phone to follow well-known people on the social internet. Furthermore, the more time people spend on mobile phones or computers, the fewer opportunities people have to communicate face to face with others people. For instance, children who are addicted to watching video on mobile phones or on computers instead of playing the outdoor game, are more prone to obesity .
At the same time, I believe that when people are used to communicating on mobile phones or computers, they might feel difficult to convey their ideas and express emotions . For instance, when people chat with friends on Facebook, they send happy sticker instead of smiling. Also, using mobile phones and computers is waste of time while people should spend time on developing their communication skills . For instance, in the class meeting, instead of talking with teachers to broaden their knowledge, they use their phones that make the meeting is not meaningful.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that people are losing the ability to communicate face to face when more and more people are using mobile phones or computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04964539007 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56951112539 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450354609929 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2753810364 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457423557379 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222070790126 0.084324248473 263% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196682006071 0.0667982634062 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409126552652 0.151304729494 270% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163736920701 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.