today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. discuss the causes of rising unemployment among young adults and suggest any solutions.
In this day and age, of those social problems that people are confronted with, the most influential is unemployment. The young adults' unemployment is, in particular, a troubling issue preoccupying many governments across the world. Many people blame economic recession as the main reason while there are many other forces that foster the consistency of unemployment. This essay will analysed these causes and potential solutions.
The biggest culprit of rising unemployment among young people is their lack of work experience and practical skill set. Fresh from high school or college, young jobseekers generally have little, if any, hands-on experience, which employers are sought after. obviously, most of theoretical knowledge they have obtained from the text is inadequate and hardly satisfactorily consistent with the general practice in the workplace. This weakness can be fatal at a time when the market has a strong preference on skilled and experienced applicants. Additionally, economic crisis also makes a significant contribution to impede the vacancies which graduates could apply. During the crisis period, the economic in the globe is desperately stagnated with a myriad of corporations regardless of the size scale being put on the verge of calling in the receivers. Those business, thus, in order to survive and weather a downturn, have to lay off a large number of redundant employees and curtail their business.
To tackle with this inherent issue requires the commitment of both society and youngsters themselves. Firstly, a solution is for government to provide incentives and tighten the trade regulation in order to revitalize and accelerate the economy. no sooner are unnecessary taxes reduced than companies can attract overseas capital, leading to a significant recovery. Secondly, schools should put emphasis on integrating academic subjects with vocational ones, which helps students be well-prepared for the job-hunting market. Actually, if job training courses and consultancy services are available for the young unemployed, they can have an overall accurate of the job labour and make proper adjustment from school to work.
As suggested above, lack of work experience and economic instability are two major reasons that account for youngsters' unemployment. However, comprehensive policies of government and vocational courses can improve this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'analyse'
Suggestion: analyse
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Suggestion: Obviously
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: No
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66852367688 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06621347951 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623955431755 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9513519102 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.055555556 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100607144193 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300174413809 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460680488201 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553392075721 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248976833411 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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