Today, the qualities of life of people in big cities are worse. What are the causes of this problem? Any measures should be taken to solve it?
It is true that the standard of living in the metropolises are decreasing dramatically. Although there will be undoubtedly some consequences of this phenomenon, societies should take steps to mitigate these potential problems .
Three main factors are to blame for the poor living condition in urban areas. Firstly, many traffic bottlenecks ,which stem from the dilapidated and undeveloped transport infrastructure in the mega city, make it difficult for the commuters to travel between distant places. Secondly, in the employee-less friendly environment in some companies, the bosses, which give excessive workloads and oppressive deadlines, causes workers to feel strenuous. There is ample evidence suggesting that the employees working for well-known corporations in New York and Los Angeles suffer from stressful and time-consuming jobs, which augments the unprecedented stress rate in America. Finally, because of the overpopulation in urban cities, the sanitation and hygiene of the apartments where people from average backgrounds live and the air quality are not maintained , which accounts for respiratory and digestive diseases.
There are several measures that not only the government and the head of the corporations but also the citizens in modern cities should take so as to address the issue. The government should subsidize for the improvement in the road network and the city transportation. Moreover, it is the national leaders who should provide dwellers with fresh waters and enhance the atmosphere. In addition, the companies in the big cities should entitle their worker to paid holidays, which are the alleviation for the friction between the employers and the employees. Finally, it is the responsibility for the city inhabitants to reduce driving cars and motorbikes and start using public transportation. For example, in some developed cities such as London, if people did not travel by the subways and the double-deckers, the traffic congestion and the high level of exhausted fumes from private cars would be major problems.
In conclusion, various actions can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the quality of life of people in big cities is worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50882352941 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11010651898 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585294117647 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6138147318 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.785714286 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233654990104 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074527006147 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947831241276 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172210289993 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127416487737 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.