Topic: most large countries nowadays operate multi-nationally. To what extent do you agree or disagree that multinational companies have responsibility toward local communities in which they operate?
It is common to see the large-sized cooperation base their office in several countries. I believe that while they focus on maximizing their profits, they should cater to the needs of wider society, especially the local communities where they work.
From the social perspective, multinational companies should be accountable for creating jobs for the local people and treating them well rather than exploiting them. This is because no sooner are factories constructed than farmers is deprived of farmland, leading to unemployment and the spread of social vice in their neighborhood. Therefore, it is of paramount important to cater to people’s lives here. For example, only by paying the reasonable wages do they can meet the materialistic life and shoulder financial burdens. In addition, the ceaseless development of business always coincides with the damage of environment. Hence, firms have to safeguard the environment by adapting dynamic environmental technology to recycle water and reduce toxic fumes into the air.
Besides, it is mutually beneficial as to when business subsidizes a small proportion of their profit to local charities and education initiatives. Actually, taking social responsibility is considered as the most effective to build their reputation, promote their images and attract the attention of local communities. It is also understood that only giving the local incentives do business expand the customer base and hold the larger market share. Take Microsoft as a telling example of a well-known cooperation which provides a great number of computers and softwares to schools at remote areas, has become the most prosperous computing brand in the world.
In conclusion, multinational companies should be spurred to take social responsibilities which bring a wide range of benefits not only for business themselves but also local communities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opment of business always coincides with the damage of environment. Hence, firms ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52777777778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12361080233 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4729882992 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154086345027 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467705175793 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382146225686 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971700690173 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219176477656 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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