Acquiring information is impretive for people live in the constantly changing world. Regarding the best avenues to gather information, people diverge opinions. Some people deem that newspaper is the best route for ceceiving information; whereas, others perfer different approach. This essay will discuss these two opinions.
To begin with, some people insist that newspaper is an effective approach to acquire pertinent information because news in newspaper are genuine information. People only gazette factual message on newspaper. Besides, information published on newspaper was screened by editors, which assuers the validity of the information. For example, job seekers can easily find a job through advertisements on newspaper. On the other hand, newspaper is slow in updating. Majority newspapers publish daily, which means readers are reading news of yesterday. Actually, news of yesterday is not new any more. Even slow in updating, newspaper is a effictive way to disburse and receive information.
By comparison, other people believe that internet is a better alternative for gathering information, because news on internet are tightly update. In some circumstances, news are accessible to public on live. For instance, sports lovers can watch matchs on live podcast. However, internet is repleted with voluminous information and a large proprotion of it is useless and misleading. Therefore, internet sufer frequently find them in a predicament that they cannot find any useful information after browsing for half an hour.
To recapitulate, newspaper and internet are common routes that people use to find desired information. Both approachs have merits and demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05030883682 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5358661627 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7894736842 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1578947368 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271037855162 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786833216137 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625796359976 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15899563818 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053944491184 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.24 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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