Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Universities around the globe should not restrict their admissions to a particular community or gender. The lead to the argument for freedom for education any country. As a result, to a greater extent I disagree on accepting equal number on different genders for University courses.
In line with the above, University admissions should be results oriented and should not be based on genders. Regardless of gender discrimination, all the people, who have achieved good results, should have the right to follow higher education. a male or female, who has achieved good results, should have the right to follow higher education. A male or female, who has achieved high results should not be eliminated, due to the fact that, maximum number of gender admissions are reached.
Furthermore, different countries have different practices on female education. Certain countries do not encourage female education or following higher higher qualification. As a result, men in those countries will be penalized in those countries, if equal number scheme is introduced. The male admissions have to restricted, which is beyond their control.
In addition, there are certain subjects in Universities, which are tailor made to men society. Those subjects such as, law and supply chain management are highly favored among men. As a result, gender equality in those subjects can not be implemented.
in summary, to a higher extent, I personally believe attracting equal number of gender community for Universities subjects should not be practiced. This will create distress situation among one particular community
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...situation among one particular community
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'in addition', 'in summary', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275618374558 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.151943462898 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102473498233 0.0946595960268 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0318021201413 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0141342756184 0.0437548338989 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102473498233 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0565371024735 0.0403226058552 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98969570977 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318021201413 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0812720848057 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0353356890459 0.021408717616 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017667844523 0.011925033212 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1608.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 316.048096192 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.48387096774 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.475806451613 0.374742101984 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.342741935484 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.270161290323 0.203846283523 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181451612903 0.137316102897 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98969570977 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.037074148 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504032258065 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.0719539872 60.7387585426 77% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7347497316 49.517814964 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 127.492653851 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.814263465372 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 49.7741935484 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.19642857143 1.69124875643 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243266934888 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189256030226 0.102741220458 184% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.153858515218 0.0668466124924 230% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565105570042 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10855380927 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897613011751 0.134430193775 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553681030921 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.205313969837 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0445396325246 0.0638462369009 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140807396759 0.228012699653 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028949896865 0.058150111329 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.