we are seeing a significant increase in online shopping today What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend Give your opinion and relevant examples revised version

Online shopping or E - commerce is the one of the fastest growing industries in the world. After the introduction of information technology and worldwide web, the world has witnessed revolutionary changes in almost all the areas of business. One among them is the purchase and sale of goods, earlier it was only possible by going to the concerned shops physically. But now thing are entirely changed people can buy items from their home just by using a gadget which has access to the internet and the items will be delivered at the door step within a short time. This way of dealing with goods has some advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand, it's main attraction is convenience, individuals can buy any goods from anywhere. Nowadays people are very busy with their life, always trying hard to find balance with their personal and professional life. So they don't get enough time to go mover to shop and buy items of their preference. Furthermore, when you are purchasing from an online people don't need to go to each and every shop toby different goods. They get very items under one roof whether it is stationery or electronics or clothings, the list is never ending.

On the other hand, there are some disadvantages as well. First and foremost, the buyers can not ensure the genuinity of the product. Some times customers may get totally different items than their actual orders. For instance, the Indian E- commerce giant flip cart is being sued recently sued for delivering false products. Moreover, when individuals do financial transactions of purchases over these websites, they are putting their financial credentials at risk because of lack of adequate security measures. On top of that, this kind of shopping is not adequate fee some products like apparels and footwear's. Such items need to be tested physically without actually purchasing it, in order to get get the correct size and fit.

In my opinion, this is definitely a positive trend. Just like every practice, this system also has some drawbacks but the advantages are clearly outweighing the disadvanges.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75366663653 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8575109553 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8947368421 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926868753483 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353653860519 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460382475889 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711215867582 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458522755739 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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