We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Today, there are a lot of problems happening in our world and there are also many ideas about solving these problems. Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I completely agree with this opinion because I believe that protecting myself is protecting our world.
On the one hand, as I have mentioned, ensuring myself is securing the world because you cannot save everyone’s lives. Some people say that helping everyone in our world is the priority but they only say so and they do nothing. For example, there is recently an outbreak named ‘COVID-19’ caused by coronavirus all over the world. As you can see, a person that has the disease can infect an unbelievable number of people. Therefore, in this situation, protecting yourself is the most necessary thing to do.
At the same time, being a student, I can hardly do anything. I cannot go to different places of the world to propagate people about symptoms of the disease or how to prevent the virus from entering their bodies, for instance. And people always ignore the words from students’ mouths because they think students are immature. For example, in a family, adults do not care about children, they do not let them say what they want and they obligate children to do a lot of things. Thus, students can only care about themselves.
In conclusion, assisting as many people in the world as possible is primary. However, in my opinion, the safer you stay, the more people you help.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78113207547 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59285103091 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6633331522 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26920703518 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802176903456 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634642454007 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156536428847 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673249977116 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.