As well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that besides making profit, enterprises should have social responsibilities or not still remains a source of controversy. In my opinion, I totally agree with people who claim that businesses should not only make more money but also have social responsibilities.
On the one hand, maximizing profits plays a vital role as a core function of every firm. It not only helps to grow the business, but also has ability to provide great benefits for community. For instance, the more wealthier a company is, the more tax revenue government can take from it. As a consequence, the government can use this amount of money to invest in key fields, including science, education and health care, which leads to an improvement for local standard of livings.
Furthermore, large corporations can make considerable decrease in the unemployment by providing job opportunities.
On the other hand, to achieve sustainable development, enterprises must have social responsibilities. Firstly, their activities have effect on environment. The firms just only focus on growing profit may cause a serious environmental degradation and strongly opposed waves within the community. Corporations both have to obey the law and produce long-lasting as well as environmentally friendly goods. They also have to take the responsibility to install waste treatment systems instead of discharging chemical waste directly into environment. Secondly, annual charities and financing scholarships for those who are either less fortunate or talented can help enterprises enhance their public image.
In conclusion, although generating profit is the fundamental principle of business, I consider that all businesses should conduct their business in a socially responsible manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'wealthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: wealthier
...nefits for community. For instance, the more wealthier a company is, the more tax revenue gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67424242424 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33631925493 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662878787879 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7819359283 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255369702507 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08177493964 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971186132521 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13632034245 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115263621937 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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