When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many people prefer to set money as the top priority when choosing their careers. While nobody can deny the importance of money, I personally disagree with that view because other factors, including working environment and job satisfaction, should be taken into the same consideration when making job decisions.
To begin with, there are two main reasons why salaries play a critical role in choosing a job. One reason is that without money, people cannot meet their demands. For example, everyone needs money to purchase clothes, pay bills and taxes. Besides, those who have low-salary jobs often find it difficult living comfortably and supporting their families. Typical examples are artists and painters who do not follow their careers because of money. Obviously, having a well-paid job brings about many benefits.
Apart from the practical advantages of high salaries expressed above, I believe that other factors are among the most important features when choosing a career. Firstly, the working environment should be taken into account. A good working place may include entertainment objects, colleagues and offices. All of these motivators/stimuli will increase the chance of self-development and productivity of the employee. Another essential aspect should be considered when choosing a job is job satisfaction. Many people take their jobs based on the achievements they can make, the position they may reach and the skills they may learn rather than wages. Therefore, working conditions and enjoyment are as vital as salaries when people make any job decisions.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that a high salary is not the most essential impact in choosing jobs. In fact, working environment and job satisfaction are two main influences for people’s job decisions
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92319870409 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3363283508 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4117647059 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263780762565 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078586757088 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694089153323 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163071213806 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343333146503 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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