Why do people prefer to live in a city? How would cites be designed?
In modern times, countries develop rapidly, correspondingly, the number of city has increased significantly and many people tend to move from the rural areas to the urban ones. There are plenty of the reasons why they love living in the city and the way the city should be designed to adapt human needs.
Some scientists have speculated in recent reports that the age structure in developing countries is turning to the young population period. Young people are experiencing their first step to work life and the city is likely to be their choice, as they are interested in the busy moment of the city, the noise of the streets. Besides, the crowded places and the high buildings attract them as well.
The past decade has witnessed the rapid development of the city with countless benefits. Approaching to knowledge is absolutely easier when living in urban areas rather than in rural ones. There is a dramatic rise in the number of schools with standard quality (including logical courses, modern equipment, experienced teachers) as well as bookstores, libraries with a wide range of books. Healthcare is also the cause for people's interest in the city's life, due to exceeding health services provided with many hospitals, each of which has its own specialty in curing health problems. More drugstores, private clinics are founded in order to supply inhabitants with health checks, medicines in overtime hours. As a consequence of economic development, an increasing number of companies, organizations are established and offers countless job opportunities. Moreover, the crucial advantage of living in urban areas is the accessibility to keep up the world’s newest trend as well as the latest technology.
To meet our needs, the city should be designed possibly and scientifically. There is a sharp rise in city’s population, therefore more apartments should be built to solve accommodation problems and more trees should be planted to arrest the environmental pollution. In addition, while industrial areas should be outside the city in order to reduce air and noise pollution caused by factories and to utilize usage of the space land, and the offices should be situated in the center of the city to easily communicate with partners especially foreign trade. Supermarkets, schools, hospitals or any constructions that serve communities should be diverse and near each other for faster service provision in any circumstances.
By the way of conclusion, it is clear that the city provides us numerous advantages. I strongly believe that the city will have a considerable difference in developing and will attract more people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27251184834 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0192223875 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561611374408 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.828746508 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.611111111 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218256095749 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662973242743 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712691144758 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122824215378 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713986366943 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.