Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender.
There have always been some physical and mental differences between male and female that they are supposed be good at some specific fields. As a result, some people think that gender should be considered as an important factor to exclude a person from certain jobs. Personally, I am totally against this assertion.
Firstly, this is a fact that men and women have their own strengths and weaknesses. Men are usually stronger than women in terms of physical characteristics and making decision. Therefore, they mainly work as pilots, sailors, drivers and other physical demanding jobs. In addition, women who are expected to be well-communicated, considerate and gentle are often considered to be better at careers involved communication and patience such as nurses, teachers, receptionists.
However, that each gender is suitable for different jobs is not the proper reason to exclude males or females from certain professions. First of all, no one can prevent others from pursuing their dream jobs because it is one of the basic rights of every human being as long as it is legal. This enables people to find their passion and contribute the best of them to the society as they are really interested in what they do. Additionally, prohibiting people from choosing their career can create the inequality and trigger the hatred in social life. For instance, a woman tries hard training to be a pilot, but she is not qualified just because of her gender. She will feel unfair and lose her motivation and faith in the society.
In conclusion, though different genders have their own characteristics, it should not be the decisive matter to exclude someone from certain careers as people have the right to choose their career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08450704225 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85019062344 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9698517948 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352279289543 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106601330778 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102640400307 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205697885266 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526337148547 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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