Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender ?
There are certain consideration of factor which everyone can take into acount to investigate and examine how it is logical keep away men and women from some jobs because of their sex. I certainly believe that several occupations might be performed by only one gender. Someone can evidently weight the pros and the cons of my each reasons. The reasons on which my stance is based are discussed in detail below.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my stant point is concerned with this issue that there are many professions which need physical abilities, such as , military service, public bus driver. These can be profess by a man. The best example that fit this notion is capability of power which comes from our innate characteristic. For example , most of the time women can not make a critical decision without being under the influence of their emotions due to their personalities. In order to be a good soldier , the decisions should be made with logic. It goes without saying that military service is convenient just for men
Another crucial reason which deserve some word here is that the personality is quite important for some professions. In addition nursing care is a job that need to be carry out by women who are polite, emotional and soft It is significant to consider that nurses have a good reputation as a soft-handed. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the subject is the nurse friend of mine from high school. For instance , I visited her at the hospital when i was sick last year. She gave an injention to me. Altough I had been afraid of injection in that time , I didnt even feel pain owing to her soft-handed. Without a shadow of doubt profession of nursing care is quite appropriate for female.
Having considered al the aforementioned grounds discuss above , I am of opinion that it is clear two major factor which are physical abilities and personality has played substantial role choosing professions in people’s life. I strongly advocate my points owing to they are well enough convincing reasons form approval.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87005649718 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77661642389 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3958524137 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131674829681 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364842591117 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436634382205 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079550552612 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420514432112 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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