As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result.
From the last century, the technology has been advanced more and more. Because of technology, they are flying from one country to another country in an hour; they are saving money and time by using internet services. With the help of this advanced technology, humans are getting huge benefits. Along with the advantages of the technology, there are disadvantages also.
Postman, who delivers letters, money, and other things, is no where to find in this modern world because of the electronic mails services and ATM machines. In very rare cases, he appears at our doors. As the world has been advancing in technology more, people get rid of postman. For example, before the ATM machines evolved, everyone had to use the services of a postman to send or get money from their allegiances, acquaintances, relatives, etc, In order to send letters or messages to their, people, beloved one's. But, the electronic mail system has made the postman in our streets disappeared.
Today, in banks, we see more computers than the employees. Before computer, the accountants used pen and papers for records. As computer has introduced to the world, the only few employees has needed to operate computers to save the log.
In this way, as technology has been playing the higher role than most of the job positions. However, research opportunities regarding the technology have been increasing as the demand for technology has been growing day by day. In overall, the losing job positions is not good sign for the employment of a country, as some job positions require little education beyond the job positions of technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...the technology, there are disadvantages also. Postman, who delivers letters, mone...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...rs letters, money, and other things, is no where to find in this modern world beca...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
...se of the electronic mails services and ATM machines. In very rare cases, he appears at our ...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
...rid of postman. For example, before the ATM machines evolved, everyone had to use the servic...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28064516129 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.058064516129 0.0946595960268 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0225806451613 0.0501214627716 45% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0258064516129 0.0437548338989 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138709677419 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0709677419355 0.0403226058552 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76610460902 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290322580645 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103225806452 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00645161290323 0.011925033212 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1615.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04868913858 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367041198502 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284644194757 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217228464419 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138576779026 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76610460902 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.7152709267 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9390049198 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.814263465372 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 46.2644194757 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.33846153846 1.69124875643 138% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239169986227 0.332605444948 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103002501758 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0714231192475 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570112345121 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138612115052 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105737757209 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537419559956 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30118174493 0.324371583561 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0272906116977 0.0638462369009 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16530282824 0.228012699653 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312487670807 0.058150111329 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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