Write a comparative essay about living in the countryside and living in the city.
There has been an increasing concern about choosing living environment in the society these days. People find it hard to choose whether they should live in the countryside or in a city since these two are vastly different in many aspects including lifestyle, job opportunities and environment.
Firstly, living in rural areas, as opposed to a crowded town, refers to a peaceful and slow pace of life due to its thinly populated feature. Also, people living here are mostly engaged in agricultural work, which doesn’t demand fixed and intense working schedule. As a result, they are more friendly and easy-going than ones having to deal with stressful work and fast lifestyle in big city. However, people in cities are better adapted to different conditions and more discipline.
In terms of job opportunities, a city offers a diversity of types of work, especially jobs about services and business. Labors working here have to be always updated and competitive to catch up with the latest technological development. In contrast, the countryside is the ideal haven for ones who are interested in agricultural fields because the main economic source here is from agriculture.
Finally, environment is one of the noticeable factors that concerns people as they choose their residential district. Living in the countryside is obviously more comfortable and healthy thanks to fresh and clean air with natural landscapes. However, big cities, in spite of its polluted atmosphere, provide its residents with a wide range of modern and exciting entertainment such as amusement park, large shopping mall and luxurious restaurants.
In short, both living conditions have its own appealing features in term of lifestyle, career opportunities and environment. To make a good decision about where to settle down, people have to consider all differences and their own taste of lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...en an increasing concern about choosing living environment in the society these days. ...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y are more friendly and easy-going than ones having to deal with stressful work and ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, in contrast, in short, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36026936027 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0105755168 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5989698876 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191921869889 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063684143078 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568440939343 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10411735497 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048056520051 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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