Write a comparative essay about studying at home through the internet and going to school
In the era of advanced technology, going to school is not the only options for getting a good education. People now can choose between taking traditional courses and studying at home through the internet after considering all the significant differences including the study environment, flexibility and cost.
First of all, learning in a real classroom offers students a real environment to develop their communication as well as teamwork skills because they have more chances to interact with other friends. In contrast, studying at home provides students with ideal space to focus on their study and explore their ability of critical thinking and independent working, which are hardly to acquire when they are always surrounded by others. In term of flexibility, online courses seem to be more appealing as they allow learners study whenever they want and whatever they like. People can design their own schedule to study and work at the same time. However, having a fixed schedule at school is considered to be more effective for students to study since it urges them to learn every day and avoid the situation of being lazy and distracted by household comforts. Finally, expenditure is a noticeable factor in every student’s concern. Though both style of study require fee, the amount of money you have to pay is different. Studying at home, which means you do not have to commute to school and use school’s facilities, obviously costs less than studying at school. Yet, spending money on school tuition gives you a chance to enjoy a diversity of useful study materials as well as reliable information resources.
In short, these two types of studying offer students different experience in three main aspects. To make the right the decision on getting which type of education, students have to take all differences into account and consider their own condition as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...to take all differences into account and consider their own condition as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, well, in contrast, in short, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1661237785 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79571824197 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5729698587 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249183481191 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876464858654 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833558423657 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16409208879 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101049349919 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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