Write at least 250 words.
In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the past few decades, obesity and delicate health have become alarming problems in this modern society. These problems are blamed on inadequate nutrition and indolence. In the following paragraphs I shall delve into its causes and suggest some solutions.
For a number of reasons, the average body weight of people is rising, leading to many problems with physical conditions. Initially, more and more people are now prefer high caloric fast foods than nutritious meals. No one can deny the deliciousness and convenience of fast food. Fast food, however, contains lots of sugar, salt, carbohydrate, which make consumers get overweight. Moreover, as our lifestyle has changed a lot we are now becoming less active. We used to walk or cycle but now we drive to work. Our amount of leisure time increase as our tasks are aided by machines. We spend most of our free time sitting in front of the TV, playing video games, even kids are getting more and more bored with playing outdoors. Physical exercise seem strange and hard with us. Consequently, we get obese and many health problems.
There are several solutions that can take to resolve these issues. A nutritious diet with vegetable and meat is highly recommended and we should stay away from fast food and processed food. Also, people have to be more active by taking physical exercise, walking more often in order to burn more calories. Finally, we should change our means of transport by walking or riding bicycle to work.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that obesity and failing health are facing human problems these days. The issues are mainly caused by inadequate nutrition and indolence. It time for us to live a healthy life for the sake of our next generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'times'?
Suggestion: times
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97250859107 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57974227485 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.193701533 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.35 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085135654454 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279101651773 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314118616863 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606371436082 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254032794763 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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