You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
This issue of whether developed countries should provide other opportunities to the developing or underdeveloped countries rather than financial support. While many people choose money, I agree that other help forms will contribute to solve poverty.
On the one hand, the rich countries should boost the international cooperation programs, such as management, education, the economy so that the poor countries improve their capability of making money for their living. If there is only money, even much more money, but not know how to use it proficiently, the poor maintain the original conditions that they have had before receiving that financial supports. Therefore, not only the efficient financial management of governments but also the knowledge and the skills enhancing the labor productivity of the workforce will allow the developing countries out of poverty.
On the other hand, the acceptance of goods and manpower, which are from the poor countries, are one of the valuable helps. To take Vietnam as an example, Vietnamese labors who join in the international market, particularly in developed nations, generate additional income for their homeland and for themselves.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against financial aid, I believe that other forms of supports make the poor countries better.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55609756098 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99206167643 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9374510954 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28381556865 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119604932695 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802719635636 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166765923596 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963252331525 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.