Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it positive or negative development?
Advert are getting more and more usual in all sources of surrounding information. Therefore some people find such maturation as a negative change, however other people may argue. My point of view that the increase amount of advertisement is a mostly negative development.
In the world engulfed by advertisement people often buy things that they do not really need. That is mostly because contemporary advert is a product of a very sophisticated science the aim of which is to persuade people to buy goods and services. As a result people often do unnecessary spending which means that they spend more than they were going to and moreover people sometimes are disappointed by quality of products that they were persuaded to buy.
In addition the advert is becoming more and more annoying. It appears in places and in amount that is not appropriate. For instance if someone is trying to find particular information they have to watch a lot of advertisement during their search. People often is being distracted by advert and lose valuable time. As a result they feel frustration and anxiety.
On the other hand the advertisement is extremely important for companies. Because it helps them to sell more goods and services. It hugely contribute to companies` profits, growing and as a result to creating new jobs. Also, in a very rare occasions, advert may help people gain new information which leeds for some useful outcomes.
In conclusion, Although products and services makers get a profit from advertising, I believe that huge amount of advert demonstrates mostly negative effect, that is because it causes people to make unnecessary spending and also advertisement is annoying and distracting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: addition,
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'is' and 'being'.
Suggestion: is often being
...vertisement during their search. People often is being distracted by advert and lose valuable ...
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Message: Did you mean 'contributes'?
Suggestion: contributes
...sell more goods and services. It hugely contribute to companies' profits, growing and...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'occasion'?
Suggestion: occasion
...creating new jobs. Also, in a very rare occasions, advert may help people gain new inform...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19855595668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02460294362 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.6751850764 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174397249568 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681454234984 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918157040825 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109479387598 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061711238519 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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