Appearance is not everything Discuss

Essay topics:

Appearance is not everything - Discuss.

It is well said that appearance is only the first impression, what remains long is your knowledge, nature, and virtues. Many people believes that appearance is not everything and my thought goes strongly with the statement. There are two arguments that can support my belief as follows.

To initiate, physical look and appearance can be considered as a key to open the door of any opportunity in social and professional aspect of life. However, in long run, if appearance doesn't get supported with your knowledge,skills, nature, virtue and ethics , it will lose its value. For instance, Nowadays t...

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Average: 9 (11 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...fe. However, in long run, if appearance doesnt get supported with your knowledge,skill...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , skills
...doesnt get supported with your knowledge,skills, nature, virtue and ethics , it will lo...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...wledge,skills, nature, virtue and ethics , it will lose its value. For instance, N...
^^
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of anything. Everything that start with mostly through first impression and pres...
^^
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...rnishing. We would always prefer to eat a food with nicely served on table. However, t...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ever, taste and quality matters when it be eaten. It is equally applicable to real...
^^
Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tal world. However, nothing is permanent so as the judgements from the appearance...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'on the contrary']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248878923767 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.121076233184 0.155533422707 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103139013453 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650224215247 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0538116591928 0.0437548338989 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112107623318 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0112107623318 0.0403226058552 28% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.7911159906 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291479820628 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0762331838565 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0201793721973 0.021408717616 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0156950672646 0.011925033212 132% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2373.0 1933.35771543 123% => OK
No of words: 395.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00759493671 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354430379747 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248101265823 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182278481013 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146835443038 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7911159906 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.037074148 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572151898734 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 66.967578736 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4583333333 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5520937233 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4583333333 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 41.2684599156 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.55140186916 1.69124875643 92% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179260843569 0.332605444948 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0789183143385 0.102741220458 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0568617878393 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453205997386 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138358770588 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705032160382 0.134430193775 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748234305787 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.289577255799 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0467664625831 0.0638462369009 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141969612439 0.228012699653 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080881550126 0.058150111329 139% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.68436873747 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Many people believes that
Many people believe that

in long run,
in a long run,

Nowadays there are many attractive mobile phones are available in the market at cheaper rate.
Nowadays there are many attractive mobile phones which are available in the market at a cheaper rate.
Nowadays there are many attractive mobile phones available in the market at a cheaper rate.

in field of cinema.
in the field of cinema.

Everything that start with
Everything that starts with

We are in living in judgemental world.
We are in living in a/the judgemental world.

Sentence: So, to break the ice at initial state, one has to do their make over in decent and tidy manner that can appeal people to pay their attention to the person.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to their and make

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2

Your essay is great. Double check grammar issues after essay writing.

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 1906 1500
No. of Different Words: 225 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.813 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.634 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.545 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.253 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5