Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that it takes a lot to gain name and fame. Although some people believe that it’s their right to know every detail about famous personalities, I would argue that media is not fair towards them and they should be given privacy like all other normal people.
On the one hand, those who believe in invading in celebrity’s privacy might argue that it’s the people who make the individuals famous. They feel that they have ticket to invade in the private life of famous personalities. For example, people wants to know even the minute details of an actor’s life. Nowadays even the media is deploying the journalists outside the houses of famous people so, they can provide juicy updates to the audiences. A lot of invasion in their life’s can land them in controversies.
On the other hand, my view is that the famous people should be given privacy as they are also normal people when they are out of public eye. These people also go through various emotions like happy times, difficult times just like all others. For instance, famous people should be left undisturbed when they are on vacation and enjoying some me time or family time. Like all other people these famous people have their secrets too which they like to keep private.
In conclusion, Famous people are also human beings going through life’s up’s and down’s and both the media and general people respect their privacy and not invade too much in their life’s.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'ticketed'.
Suggestion: ticketed
...iduals famous. They feel that they have ticket to invade in the private life of famous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93227091633 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53777042416 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.427709584 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315278112892 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125964922635 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609115454707 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201729147382 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151881793081 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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