Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
From my everyday experience and observation I am analyzing this topic of people taking less interest in Arts. It is not surprising to see that most people think that attentions are diverted to technological, business and scientific interest. I do agree with the above statement.The causes of this growing topic are the businesses that have become the necessity of life for earnings. Science is no longer remain for discovery only but it has gone way beyond it. Lastly, technology has taken over people lives to a great extent that they cannot imagine their lives without it. Let us take a more detailed look at the reasons of losing the interest in Arts.
One of the main reason of losing the focus on Arts of any country is the government who is reluctant to invest more money to promote their own culture and focusing on earnings and new findings. Other reason is may be the leisure or business activities that turning the people mind towards technology. For instance, spending vacations or expanding business in different parts of the world require travelling and for that jets are require to move people from one place to another. Therefore, focusing on people demands more aircraft are introducing different technologies to attract the customers to use their company aircraft.
After grasping a complete picture and enlighten the pros and cons of the above topic this is the duty of the people that they should realize their responsibilities towards promoting their own country's culture. Nevertheless, government has the responsibility to change her policies regarding the disbursement of their annual budget in investing more in their own culture and less on science and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11913357401 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85683908175 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4117079702 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169204331852 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578080344909 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375381400573 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11092491295 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490904183465 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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