Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
There is no doubt that living in luxurious life is limited to celebrities. Yet, the problems of being a well-known cannot be overlooked. Controversially, a hard question is being raised as to which outweighing the scale, benefits or problems. I sincerely believe that the advantages are more than disadvantages.
The life of celebrities are complicated. Outwardly, their life seems to be splendid, however by going deeply in their personal life, problems can be found. The luxurious life can adversely affect on them, by addicting to alcohols and drugs which lead to many other problems. These problems may be psychologically such as severe depression and mentally as well. Moreover, media is obviously deemed as a paramount factor which have negative effect on celebrities as it contributes to exacerbate the problems.
In contrast, there are numerous advantages of being a well-known. Living in an enormous houses with large air-parks and driving a fantasy cars, these dreams come true because of the prodigious income which has been earned. In comparing with other people, celebrities receive a special treatment in healthcare centers. Furthermore, they are not popular but also a role models for many children. For example, at social network websites like Instagram or Facebook, millions of fans constantly follow either football players or movie stars, and likely young children try to be the same character of their popular celebrity in the real life.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the difficulties, in my opinion, being a well-known brings many advantages. Accordingly, I think that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48818897638 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21084173061 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1679181224 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282721176546 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087642454089 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746185478897 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165349642041 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481781741309 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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