In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In UK, when people get old they moved to a home with other senior citizen people Because of the neglect or being left out in complete isolation by children. This is the place where they are not only going to spend their time but also the nurses are going to look after them. I believe that it should be the solely responsibility of the government to take care of the expenses instead of their family.
Firstly, Perhaps the most significant and inevitable factor is the rise of inflation in the economy. Although old people have some finances but they are not enough to cope with current economic condition. This has led to the rise in the cost of medicines, which have gone much higher as compared to what prices were in the last three years.
In the recent study made by IMF, 50% to 60% of the old people population are unable to meet the expenses based on a meagre income by the government. Secondly, Government can spend some part of their pubic budget which would help to give them a calm, composed and serene life, while enjoying the end part of their life.
However, it becomes increasingly difficult for the family members to meet the end needs of their parents, while majority of them are suffering from chronic disease. If family were to support the parents, it would result in increasing their expenses by three fold times which can cause them to borrow money from either banks or other institutes.
Overall, it seems reasonable to me that government should increase their public budget in order to fulfil the needs of the senior citizens. They can go for alliance with any of the private insurance companies to reduce the government expenditure to some extent while not affecting the facilities at the old age home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72039473684 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43159309847 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.1771475825 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288026911618 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956830783116 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680249473581 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148015722151 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989696304121 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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