In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home
with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.
Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the
family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
In the UK, the elderly are looked after by caregivers in old people’s
homes. This essay believes that the State should pay for this type of
assistance because of the contribution that old people have made to
their society, and most families can’t cope with the financial burden.
When a person gets to the age where they need help looking after
themselves, the government should pay for this because that person
has given the government tax all their life. In the UK, everyone has to
pay National Insurance and income tax, and part of this should go
towards helping the aged. For example, if a person was making just
minimum wage and paying tax every month for 30 years, this would
add up to hundreds of thousands of pounds, which is more than enough
to cover the cost of taking care of that person when they are old and
infirm.
If the government does not pay, then the bill is left with the family and
most people simply can’t afford this on top of their normal bills. The
average wage in the United Kingdom is around 36,000 pounds and the
average nursing home bills are around 12,000 pounds per annum. The
majority of people are unable to hand over a third of their wage, and
matters are worse if they have more than one elderly relative to pay for.
To conclude, our older people or their families should not have to worry
about expensive nursing bills after they retire because the
contributions they make when they are working should pay this
expense and their families would not be able to afford the bills without
assistance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to look' or 'look'.
Suggestion: to look; look
...on gets to the age where they need help looking after themselves, the government shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, third, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75636363636 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16464758646 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9982078594 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409174925566 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170869602614 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074493925898 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114378052194 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820040576545 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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