Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
One of the profit of improving IT is the ability of buying things online through the Internet. It is becoming more common between people to search online for their needs and offer them. However, in my opinion, buying from Internet websites has some drawbacks, if it be under surveillance and its security be powerful, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
It is said that websites, though they have a high security level, sometime have been attacked by hackers and the clients’ information, especially the credit cards and bank account data, has been stolen. In addition, when a person wants to offer from the Internet, they do not have the ability of touching or checking the materials used in products, or checking the accuracy of products health until those things be received by customer. In the one hand, for buying cloths, proofing a cloth for checking the size and the good looking is essential which not possible for online buyer.
On the other hand, time is an important factor in modern life and people always want to make some free time to have some fun or do entertains. When they easily can buy what they want with some clicks in their home, E-commerce can be more common and popular in society. When there are many websites that announce same things in different look or price and people quickly can check and buy their needs through the Internet, why do they waste their time in traffic jams or in searching from a shop to another?
In conclusion, although buying things on the Internet has some disorders in security, it has some benefits that can be considered as a crucial profit to save time. so I finally attend to say that pros of online shopping outweigh the cons.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241486068111 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.185758513932 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0588235294118 0.0946595960268 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340557275542 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0526315789474 0.0437548338989 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130030959752 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.061919504644 0.0403226058552 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50466730783 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216718266254 0.0326793684256 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0990712074303 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0123839009288 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216718266254 0.011925033212 182% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1696.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76870748299 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34693877551 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238095238095 0.28420135186 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187074829932 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0918367346939 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50466730783 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.346215849 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.7272727273 20.7743622355 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0402934312 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.181818182 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7743622355 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.5367965368 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.59090909091 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444567464795 0.332605444948 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130402388249 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592052714042 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.615038037855 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107748366542 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195571084781 0.134430193775 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620496002409 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.329901199411 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0837059897985 0.0638462369009 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297614053046 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802153041706 0.058150111329 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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