car ownership is increasing so rapidly in past 30 years that cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. More poeple should use public transport. Do you agree or disagree?
Around the world, people are spending more time stuck in the traffic then there were few decades ago. I think adoption of public transport is necessary if cities want to function efficiently.
Undoubtedly, having the private car has its benefits. Most important of them all is convenience it provides. For instance, go from my home to shopping mall, it takes at least 10 to 15 minutes on my car. However, division if I use a bus I have to wait at the nearest bus stop for the bus to come.
Nevertheless, the benefits of using public transport far outweigh those of private cars. For instance, public transport makes efficient use of road capacity as a normal bus takes as much Road space as three cars, but it can accommodate 50 to 60 people travelling in that space as compared to 4-6 people travelling in private car.
Furthermore, public transport is a safer mode of transport for both passengers and as well as Road users. Since drivers of Public buses are employed and trained, they take their jobs professionally and drive within the speed limits and lanes. In my city, most people are afraid to walk or cycle even for short distance because sometimes car drivers end up driving very close to side lines in order to break free of traffic which is more likely encouraging traffic.
In conclusion, traffic chamber increasingly creating problems for cities. Using public transport would not only make City safe but also promotes smooth functioning of road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, at least, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87250996016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6868722027 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6964511846 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186150182685 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067340505932 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385463041239 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110606711127 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398394106575 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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