Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives.
What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce this? Write at
least 250 words.
These days, children are often seen to face a lot of pressure from schools, parents, and society owing to the increase in competition. However, various steps can be taken to deal with this issue.
To begin with, the increase in competition as compared to the past is a prime factor which overburden children's mind to score good academic grades. For instance, I did not have to compete with anyone to get admitted to a school. On the contrary, children these days have to go through though entrance exams to make sure their seat in a reputed school or college. Another reason for this increased pressure is the change in the mindsets of parents. Parents these days are well educated and equipped with modern technological resources to explore the different possibilities for better career prospects of their children. Therefore, they pressurize their children to follow the path they have chosen. In addition to this, sometimes a few parents want their children to be top scorers because they want to show off their children's grades in front of friends and relatives to elevate their status in society.
However, a few solutions should be implemented to protect children from undue pressure because creating unnecessary pressure on children's minds can have a detrimental impact on their cognitive development. Firstly, instead of focusing only on academic grades, schools should focus more on the overall development of students by engaging them in other activities, such as dancing, sports, and painting. These activities will help to relieve some burden of doing the best in exams of their minds. Secondly, parents should also change their mindsets and leave their children to choose their career paths by themselves.
In conclusion, children have to face an exorbitant amount of pressure from society and home, and it may negatively impact their minds; however, mutual efforts by school and parents can reduce the pressure on children's minds to a great extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68711471462 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2765311679 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217900720476 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823341353426 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556600393395 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162413864942 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295533352698 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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