Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It
would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more
traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over the last 10 years computers have become more accessible to people. As a result our children have began to spend many time in front of computers or electronic entertainments. I suppose would be better to play in traditional games with a ball, a bike ets.
In the society when parents are so busy to earn money, many children are staying home and spending free time playing in computer games. Thus they are getting problem with vision and bad physical development, as a result they are will have different kind of disease.
Therefore main task as a parents are should to limit time access to the computer till 4 hours per day. Also parents have to spend free time with the kids outside, and play in games, walk around and to show to kids how to spend time without computer but very interesting with different kind of activities. I am not against the computer, but it should be within reasonable limits. Moreover our government should to build special sport grounds with sport equipments in different districts of city for them. On the other hand if kids will spend a lot of time outside without control, they cat to meet a bad company or to get injury.
In conclusion I would to wish to parents and kids to spend free time together, to show them some games from your childhood, and to give them sometimes to play in the computer. Kids is our future, and in our hands to make them more successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...o people. As a result our children have began to spend many time in front of computer...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...result our children have began to spend many time in front of computers or electronic ent...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ional games with a ball, a bike ets. In the society when parents are so busy ...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ng free time playing in computer games. Thus they are getting problem with vision an...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will have different kind of disease. Therefore main task as a parents are sho...
^^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ll have different kind of disease. Therefore main task as a parents are should to li...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...of disease. Therefore main task as a parents are should to limit time access to the ...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s to the computer till 4 hours per day. Also parents have to spend free time with th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... it should be within reasonable limits. Moreover our government should to build special ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...meet a bad company or to get injury. In conclusion I would to wish to parents...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
.... In conclusion I would to wish to parents and kids to spend free time together, ...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion I would to wish to parents and kids to spend free time together, to show the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59126984127 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52017245668 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.330922793 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192877848047 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741998504787 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399898345146 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119801110975 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427828584584 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.