Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same TV programs as their friends. Should parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
I am analyzing the topic of children activities should be as same as their friends using my everyday experience and observations. This may not surprise to see that if parents have a perception that children should watch the same programs and play the same games as their friends. I also agree with the statement. The main causes of this opinion are sharing the same values and building up healthy relationships.
Sharing the same activities with other children does not let them feel "out of league". It is a human phenomena that doing something different from others make them isolated. Children have more tendency to develop this feeling and therefore, they soon start feel less confident. Nevertheless, it should not be forgotten that children have diverse skills and should parents let them choice their own activities rather imposing one on them.
Young children have the curiosity to learn the same things as their friends are involved in. By watching the same TV programs and games they have plenty of things to share. For instance, in schools, they often talk about the new games or some interested programs broadcasting on television. Those who follow the trend have plenty of points to discuss and build up good relationships with each other and those who don't feel like the alien on the streets. Again, it is not necessary that children follow the footsteps of their peers. They have their own will to choose their way to live.
After grasping the entire picture and enlighten the pros and cons of the growing topic discussed above I believe this is the duty of the parents to realize that children should not be treated as their project but the future of the country who later can be an Einstein or the Vinci. Government should also monitor the children activities and must keep record of each children by surveying in schools to ensure that they are doing what they actually want to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
...apos;out of league'. It is a human phenomena that doing something different from oth...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tionships with each other and those who dont feel like the alien on the streets. Aga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91358024691 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5465188829 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0054821925 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299996927118 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105238441049 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970283649216 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1890094433 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891749862446 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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