As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society ?
Nowadays, the economy and the technology grows so fast in many countries, so there is a fair amount of residents who prefer to live individually or in small groups rather than to live in big communities. This essay is going to discuss what the causes of this trend are as well as what the impacts on those nations.
Regarding the causes, there are two main reasons that contribute to the development of this style. Firstly, people do not have time to communicate with other ones, such as the workers are extremely busy at work and tired post their shift. Consequently, they really want to relax lonely without dirtubing from others. Additionally, each people in this modern society has their own smart device, such as smart phones, tablets, or laptops. They tend to focus on their personal device even when meeting other ones. 50 percent of young people will tend to live individually if they usually use smartphone while meeting friends, according to the research from Havard University.
The trend will bring some negative impacts on the society of nations which are experiencing this. Firstly, the family connection will be loosening because of this living style. For example, a son or a daughter who did not talk to the parents for a while because of living far from their parents will lose connection easily. Furthermore , people who do not want to expose with the society will get stress easier than the opposite ones. As a result, those ones tend to find to the death because they feel stress and they do not know which ones they should share feeling with. According to the recent research, 30% of young generation in Korea is feeling stress and they used to think about the death.
In conclusion, having the heavy workloads and abusing the smart devices are the reasons that lead the grow of living in small family groups in this modern world. This not only affects negatively the connection between parents and children, but it also impacts on the mental health of the young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, regarding, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84795321637 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48651301719 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4509955408 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256816040674 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787973324258 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694813822576 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156036602431 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066547277673 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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