Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give your reasons with own knowledge and give examples.
The issue of freedom of creative artist has extremely grown in importance in most countries over the few decades. It is considered that government should not interfere with their works and the artists should be free to do whatever they want. While I accept many artists are sharing their valuable ideas for the tremendous development of this world, I believe some certain area they should be controlled by the rules and regulation.
Admittedly, the human civilisation has approached this sophisticated stage because many creative artists have bestowed us an enormous number of significant ideas and opinions in the form of pictures, music or films. As an example, many creative artists like Leonardo Da Vinci, Pablo Picasso and Michelangelo Buonarroti had first drawn the design of aeroplane; but, at that time nobody could think that human can fly and everybody thought it was just imagined of his mind. Although it required a long time, but it became true that human now can fly. This example makes it clear that the work of artists can lead to immense improvement of humankind. Therefore, many people think that they should be free with their works for the advancement of the human being.
On the other hand, there are some vital reasons why the work of artists should be controlled in some certain area. Firstly, most people in this world believe in the God; so the artist should not create such type of acts, which hurt the religion. If this type of activity they make, it may bring colossal embarrassment to the human society. Secondly, the artist should not go against any culture and costume of a country. In this certain field, government can limit the practice of an artist.
In conclusion, the creative artists are indispensable in our society although some artists have tended to draw against our cast, creed, and religion. In my opinion, this tendency may call harmful to our mankind so that the government should control the activity, which can go directly against to our culture and religion.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as for', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246648793566 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.134048257373 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911528150134 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.029490616622 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.058981233244 0.0437548338989 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134048257373 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.029490616622 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60912711692 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0160857908847 0.0326793684256 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107238605898 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0428954423592 0.021408717616 200% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0107238605898 0.011925033212 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2016.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9821958457 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350148367953 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272997032641 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178041543027 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103857566766 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60912711692 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.8374903656 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4666666667 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2014899745 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.4 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 49.7663699308 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.84337349398 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266671251043 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130624042702 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759428382441 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581116147335 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118618044659 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118460749759 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068816723759 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.374639315332 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0232207149908 0.0638462369009 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198971588443 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612956809721 0.058150111329 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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