The death penalty is the best way to control serious crime. To what extent do you agree?
The death penalty is considered as the most effective method to control heinous crimes. In my point of view, capital punishment can act as an efficient deterrent to criminals, as it will greatly benefit both people and society.
To begin with, capital punishment is the best restraint from committing horrendous crimes. Common sense tells us that the most frightening thing for a human being is to lose their life, therefore the execution is the best impediment when it comes to discouraging people from carrying out the worst crimes. People who are contemplating breach of the law must see the consequences of their actions are worse if they go through without action compared to following the structure society.
Furthermore, it acts as a just punishment for crimes committed against the rights to life, freedom and safety of the victims. It is the right of an individual to live peacefully and free from harm but, unfortunately, a crime like murder, rape and assault are committed by perpetrators who have no regard for the life and property of others. Hence, the capital punishment is fair as they are brought to justice and suffer the fact they rightfully deserve. Moreover, it is reckoned by many that people who violate the rights of others are themselves responsible for their fate. For instance, the execution is done in the case of “Nirbaya Rape Case” is the best example set by the court to restrict the further such gruesome crime.
To conclude, brutal crime should be dealt with the execution-only as it is the best way to minimize the crime and also the only way to save people and society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92673992674 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77630547733 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567765567766 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9978354421 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129135944968 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513734398095 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060931084382 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898410855644 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518795256487 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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